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Mohammad Khan's avatar

Great seeing the evolution of this piece Tommy!

I'm also 23 and have run into similar lessons as you listed.

One lesson I'd like to add to your post is that once you start writing regularly, you start seeing stories in life regardless of how separate they are in space and time. (Wrote an essay on this perspective here: https://themohammadkhan.substack.com/p/life-through-a-storytelling-lens)

When I started my writing journey in 2020 through weekly fiction writing, I saw stories everywhere and in everything. The horrifically mundane moments in life -- like sitting in traffic -- became opportunities to tap into the invisible web of stories interweaving our lives and being aware of the most essential choice in life: that we have the ability to choose what we think about and choose what we focus on.

Stuck in rush hour traffic can be a momentary glimpse into hell or it can be a gift of stillness making us aware of how fast we've been moving and how much we'd like to slow down and enjoy our time here.

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Addie's avatar

Tommy, your insights are remarkable for a human of any age and all the moreso for a 23 year old. Thank you for writing them down and sharing. Was appreciating this quote yesterday from Mary Oliver: "This is the first, the wildest and the wisest thing I know: that the soul exists and is built entirely out of attentiveness.”

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